Emperor of Atlantis
Registered: Nov 2001
Fic: The Tomb: First Draft
Spoilers ? Window of Opportunity (Season 4)
Content Warning- Buried Gen. Hammond
Summary- This is the first draft of the script for the Season 5 episode, The Tomb. It changed a lot from this to its final form as you can tell.
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Gen. Hammond falls asleep in his office being very tired from having to work continually for the last 48 hours due to a crisis.
Col. O'Neill enters Hammond's office.
O'Neill: Sir. Sir, are you there?
Col. O'Neill tries shaking Gen. Hammond thinking that he may be asleep. Gen. Hammond doesn't wake up, so Col. O'Neill brings in Dr. Fraiser to see what's wrong. Dr. Fraiser pronounces him dead, and a quick funeral results to bury Gen. Hammond.
Gen. Hammond wakes up.
Hammond: That was a very restful sleep.
Gen. Hammond realizes that he is in a coffin. He screams saying that the joke isn't funny. Eventually, he realizes he has been buried. Furious, Gen. Hammond unburies himself getting more and more angry.
Back at the SGC, O'Neill and Teal'c are using the stargate as a driving range.
Teal'c: O'Neill, aren't you worried that we will get in trouble for this?
O'Neill: No. With General Hammond gone, I'm in charge at least temporarily so we can do this. We'll pick up the golf balls from Tollana next time we're there.
A very dirty Gen. Hammond is making his way to the gate room. He yells very angrily, "COLONEL O'NEILL IN MY OFFICE NOW!!!!"
Last edited by Galen on 11-11-2001 at 08:02 PM
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