Lenonn
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For the medieval era entry, the word Christians should be capitalized. Nitpicky, I know.
Also, with you citing episode titles, I'm not sure the season needs to be cited, too.
The Tok'ra leave the Goa'uld gene pool around sometime between 0AD and 2000BC would look better as The Tok'ra leave the Goa'uld gene pool around sometime between 2000 BC and 0AD instead. Also, you use both 0 AD and 0 BC. In essence, both are the same year... you might want to stick with one or the other, or make some sort of reference to 0 AD = 0 BC.
Around 2000 BC and alien called Omoroca came to Earth, it is thought she was involved with starting the revolution that threw the Goa'uld from the Earth, she was killed by Bellus should be Around 2000 BC an alien called Omoroca comes to Earth. It is thought that she was involved in stating the revolution that overthrew the Goa'uld on Earth. However, she is killed by Bellus
The first use of gods in the 8,000 to 0BC entry should not be capitalized.
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