Status: Freezing cold
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: England Elvenname: Ainari?l Telr?nya
Um. Well, I'm glad it's not shippy...
Though yeah, don't take it personally, but it seems to be more of a guys fic. (Don't all yell at me for generalising!) I mean, I'm not really into the whole Anubis storyline (not yours, SG in general), so not too attracted by that, plus I tend to be over-critical of actual SG-1 fiction (even if someone put up a script of an episode, I'd still say the characterisation was crap ). Though if you've got good visual diescription, then I might read it for that.
Don't take it personally, I'm not slating your fic, each to their own and stuff. You don't have to post it all in one go (a 20 page long post might be a little disconcerting ) I'd suggest like, one page at a time (and wait for a bit of feedback), but it's entirely up to you. When you post it, I'll read the first part, and give ya feed back on that.
Temptations, unlike opportunities, will always give you second chances.
Last edited by Venus on 12-10-2002 at 10:56 AM
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